Janeeta and Pavan: Your treatment is very good as you have explained in detail on each key area and also used good images and links to support your points. You have also gone into detail on how you are going to make it a British social realism film and what key elements and conventions you are going to need to show.
Djamel& Lauren Good: you have gone into a lot of depth when talking about target audience your storyline is very realistic, and shows the growth in the effects of social networking you have a clear idea of your characters Improvements: relate to BSR add more examples from techniques used in other films
Aran & Gokulan & Kirtan: We thought your treatment is very good, it is very detailed and looks very interesting in a presentation. You have gone into a lot of depth in every section, however, the only thing is, we thought you could have explained your conventions better. Apart from that, it is very good.
I like the book type layout. It makes it very interesting as if I'm about to read a story. So already I'm in. From there you're ideas are presented clearly and succinctly. I like the fact you're choosing the new issue of social networking because we can relate to that and it's relatively fresh. It's endearing to know you've a lot about your audience. Nice.
I like your use of issuu to present your treatment. I really like the narrative of the film because peer pressure, and relationship pressure is something a lot of people can relate to. Cyber bullying is also a big issue lately. All in all, I think you've taken all of the recent issues concerning teenagers and molded them into a film idea, I love it
Janeeta and Pavan: Your treatment is very good as you have explained in detail on each key area and also used good images and links to support your points. You have also gone into detail on how you are going to make it a British social realism film and what key elements and conventions you are going to need to show.
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ReplyDeleteGood: you have gone into a lot of depth when talking about target audience
your storyline is very realistic, and shows the growth in the effects of social networking
you have a clear idea of your characters
Improvements: relate to BSR
add more examples from techniques used in other films
Aran & Gokulan & Kirtan:
ReplyDeleteWe thought your treatment is very good, it is very detailed and looks very interesting in a presentation. You have gone into a lot of depth in every section, however, the only thing is, we thought you could have explained your conventions better. Apart from that, it is very good.
I like the book type layout. It makes it very interesting as if I'm about to read a story. So already I'm in. From there you're ideas are presented clearly and succinctly. I like the fact you're choosing the new issue of social networking because we can relate to that and it's relatively fresh. It's endearing to know you've a lot about your audience.
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I like your use of issuu to present your treatment. I really like the narrative of the film because peer pressure, and relationship pressure is something a lot of people can relate to. Cyber bullying is also a big issue lately. All in all, I think you've taken all of the recent issues concerning teenagers and molded them into a film idea, I love it
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